I was reading The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock aloud.
As one does.
Wrapped in an old blanket
Against the cold
Because ComEd sent me an email
Telling me I used more electricity
This week than last
So I turned the heat down to 65
And shivered all day
But where was I? Right
Reading T.S. Elliott as night
Fell with a glass of wine at my elbow
On my father’s little end table
Next to my mother’s old chair
That recently found its way back to me
(You can read about that elsewhere)
Where was I? Right-the wine
And the blanket
And the poem and I’m
Really getting into it
(It’s a long poem and full of imagery
That I can only sigh at
Even though I don’t fully understand it)
But where was I? Right- the cold
My arm in the tangle
Of the blanket
At this phrasing:
If one, settling a pillow or throwing off a shawl,
And I tugged
And sent the wine spraying
All over my two-day new rug.
with thanks to T.S.Elliot,
written for the dverse prompt of 1/28/21: first lines
and #1 of The Four Crises cycle: Climate
what a hoot – teasingly starts and starts again – and the wine? – well that was always going to end up where it did. Bravo.
The title is the spoiler!
Awww. It all sounded so cozy until ……….. Sorry!
I just got a little overly dramatic
Oh, how I love this wonderful stream of consciousness poem …. as I type my comment, sipping a wonderful red. Cheers.
Perfect title. Sorry the wine was lost on the rug.
Always more wine lol
Oh, you are getting very close to the edge my friend! That forgetfulness will soon engulf and you will not remember where you are…. Well done!
It’s all about the dramatic readings of poems alone in my house, really.
Works very well!
Ooh that close! I enjoyed the way you began at the start 🙂 took me right in with you. 💝
At least the glass didn’t break.
That’s a great opening line, Xan. I haven’t read that poem for a while, and not aloud. I love the rambling stream of consciousness, the conversational tone, as if you’re talking to me. I know what it’s like being wrapped up in a blanket when the heat is low. Shame about the wine on the new rug – something else I can identify with!
I was so grateful to be reminded of the poem in the prompt! It’s one of those “oh right /that’s/ a poet” works.
Wow, unexpected Xan.
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I can really see what poetry and cold can do… I think I would go for tea instead of wine though.
Hah– there is a tea version! (For a collaboration I’m working on with this guy: https://norbertmarszalek.com/